fun holidays

My idea of a Fun School Holiday
Remember the T.I.I.C structure.

T	Title - What you will be explaining
I	Introduction - Tell your audience what the topic is about and what is to be explained.
I	Information - Explain the elements or steps in a logical sequence
C	Conclusion - Final summarising statement, an evaluation or comment about what you have explained.

Title	fun school holiday!
Introduction	I am going to be writing about my holidays. And how it was and how much fun it was and where it was what i did and why i went there. So i hope you like it.
Information 1st element	Day one: When school finish we went to the airport because i was going to napier to go see my dad and my cousins. It took an hour to get to napier i went to sleep on the airplane because i woke up really early it was fun on the airplane i got woken up from the airplane when it landed.me and my siblings went to run to my dad And we hugged him. It was dark when we got there so we just went to the hotel.i was so tired and my siblings too so we made our beds and went to sleep.
Information 2nd element	The next day we went to go visit some of my dad's cousins. After we went to go visit my dad's cousins we went to go get something to eat. Then we went to go see my favorite cousins. what we did at my cousins house is We had to clean the house first then my older sisters and my older cousins. Went to the shop to go get us some chocolate and chips. When they were going to the shop we were getting the beds ready for the movie and we put a movie on but we didn't watch it until my cousins and sisters came back. A few minutes later they came back and we were eating. After we finish eating me and my cousins fell asleep.
Information 3rd element	It was the second day until we leave to go back to auckland so we went to go pick up my cousins and we went to the pools.me and my cousins went to go on the slide first because it looked really cool we made a train it was really cool and fun then we went to the hot pool because we're so cold. Then we had to get dress because we had to go to see my brothers.  After we went to the pools and went to see my brothers we went to the movies and it was really fun.we fall asleep at the movies it was so funny we went to drop off my cousins home and then we went to the hotel. When we got there we had to put our shoes away then we made our beds then we went to bed because we were so tired.
4th element	We had to get up really early because we had to go on the airplane and it was really far from the hotel.when we got up early we got our bags and we put it in the car and we got ready then we  went to go see my cousins and we said goodbye. We went to the shop and grabbed some food then we went back to the car.We quickly went to the airport i didn’t want to go back home but i had to. So we got there we went in the airplane and we said goodbye to my dad i was really sad but it was time to say goodbye. The airplane started and we had to go to was sad but yeah we got back to auckland at night.
Conclusion	We got back home it was a Sunday when we came back from Napier. when we were going back home we were talking about our holidays it was so fun for the last day was fun when we were in Napier do miss my cousins and dad but it's OK.